Create the standard email that send to the University of Buffalo International Admission with these detail: For a student from a middle-income family, studying Ielts is extremely expensive, so I chose the review title Duolingo and with a fairly good English background from a young age, I am quite sure that I can I can get a score from 110 to 115. However, I only got it on the first test on August 26. So I want to try again on December 10. But at that time, it was the final exam of the class. 12 and that is very important, so I rescheduled the exam to December 12 and will receive the results on December 14. However, at 8:34 p.m. Vietnamese time, that is, 8 a.m. American time, I received the results. informed that my test was not certified due to an error, but I assure you that I did not violate or intentionally violate anything. When reading, the website reported that I looked at another location for too long, but to be honest, I easily lost focus, so when taking the speaking test, I used my pencil to draw in the air as well as take pictures. it is the focus and look at it for a moment. That was an extremely stupid mistake when I first couldn't adjust my job, but now it's too late to retake the exam (the website allows me to retake it for free) to apply for a UB scholarship. Since I started applying to study abroad, I have really liked the school because of the dynamic and vibrant environment, especially the school's CS major occupies a high position in the top 100 universities with the highest CS major ranking. And more specifically, only UB in the NY state area can give me enough money to study and live with a family budget of 20,000 USD/year. Just because of this small problem, my enthusiasm seemed to collapse. Thanks to the encouragement of a senior at UB school, he nominated me to write an email to the school's ISS office to see if there was still a ray of light or not. I hope the school will consider this request that the school will give me the opportunity to fill out the Merit-based scholarship application before December 20 as an apology for this unnecessary mistake. Make it more fluently and more adjurely
Subject: Urgent Request for Late Submission of Merit-based Scholarship Application Due to Duolingo Examination Issue
Dear University of Buffalo International Admissions Office,
I hope this message finds you well. My name is [Your Full Name], and I am writing to request a special consideration regarding the submission of my Merit-based scholarship application.
With aspirations of joining the dynamic and esteemed CS program at the University of Buffalo, I have encountered an unexpected hurdle that I hope the University will assist me in overcoming.
Coming from a middle-income family, the financial implications of conventional English proficiency tests such as the IELTS are significantly burdensome. As an alternative, I chose to take the Duolingo English Test, leveraging my strong foundational grasp of the English language, acquired at an early age. Confident in my proficiency, I aimed for a score between 110 to 115.
My first attempt on August 26 was successful; however, due to its alignment with critical year-end examinations on December 10, I rescheduled my Duolingo test to December 12. Consequently, I received my test results on December 14, at 8:34 PM Vietnamese time (8:00 AM US time). Regrettably, I was informed that my score was not certified due to an oversight on my part during the examination process.
In an attempt to sharpen my concentration, I inadvertently fixated on a point in space for too long while drawing shapes in the air with my pencil during the speaking section. I understand now that this behavior was misinterpreted by the test's security protocols. I assure you, there was no malice or intention of misconduct on my end.
This inadvertent action has now become a stumbling block in my academic journey. As the results of the Duolingo test formed a critical part of my scholarship application—a factor that is pivotal to my ability to afford the esteemed education offered at UB.
The gravity of this situation weighs heavily on me, and the empathy of a UB alumnus has empowered me to appeal to your office for a resolution. I have been permitted a free retest by Duolingo, yet timing is a crucial factor given the approaching deadline of December 20 for scholarship consideration.
The University of Buffalo is not merely an institution I desire to attend; it is the beacon that shines on my path to academic and professional excellence. With the financial provisions at UB, my educational dreams can align perfectly with the constraints of my family's budget of 20,000 USD/year.
In light of these circumstances, I humbly request the University to graciously allow me an extension to submit my application for the Merit-based scholarship following the outcome of my impending Duolingo retest. This accommodation would serve as a heartfelt amends for a genuinely unintended error and preserve the possibility of continuing my education journey with UB.
I eagerly await your response and am hoping for a compassionate consideration from your prestigious institution, allowing me to maintain the hope of being part of UB's vibrant community.
Thank you for your time and understanding. I remain hopeful that the International Admission's office will shed a ray of light on this matter.
Warm regards,
[Your Full Name] [Your Contact Information] [Your Duolingo Test Reference Number]
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